Common Grammar and Writing Mistakes: A Guide for Students, Papers of Japanese Language

Download Common Grammar and Writing Mistakes: A Guide for Students and more Papers Japanese Language in PDF only on Docsity! COMMON GRAMMAR MISTAKES PROBLEM WORDS AFFECT VS. EFFECT Generally, affect is a verb that means “to influence.” Effect is a noun that means “result.” The storm affected a large area. The storm’s effects included many power failures. Quick caveat: In rare instances, you may see effect used as a verb that means “to cause” and affect used as a noun that means “emotion.” The drug effected a change in the patient’s condition. Her affect was one of quiet contemplation. These last two uses are fairly obscure, however. Therefore, keep this general rule of thumb in mind while you are writing: Hint In most cases, use affect when you need a verb and effect when you need a noun. BETWEEN VS. AMONG When you’re talking about two objects or people, use between. When you’re talking about more than two, use among. There was tension between Tom and Bob Laughter spread among the students when Jerry started to dance. ITS VS. IT’S Its is the possessive form of “it.” It’s means “it is.” Its wings flutter gracefully It’s considered bad luck to walk under a ladder. THAT VS. WHICH If the purpose of the clause is to single out something, use that. If, however, the clause delivers extra information that is non-essential to the sentence, use which. The book that Janet gave me fell off the table. The book, which Janet gave me, fell off the table. The beach ball spiraled toward a sea that was white with foam. Bren Writing Center Fall 2006 Workshop 2 The beach ball spiraled toward the sea, which was white with foam. Hint Read your sentence out loud. Do you pause before and/or after the clause? That pause indicates the need for a comma—and commas are used only with which. If you don’t notice yourself pausing, use that. VERB-SUBJECT AGREEMENT Getting a verb and subject to agree can be tricky. Here are a few situations to watch for:  When a relative clause—a clause that modifies a noun—begins with one of, the verb within the clause should be plural. Jennifer is one of those people who are always prepared. Peter is one of the most gifted scientists who have attacked this problem.  Each, either, everyone, everybody, neither, nobody, and someone are singular. Nobody is perfect. Everybody participates in writing class. Each of the items in these designs coordinates with the others.  Compound subjects (two or more nouns joined by “and”) take plural verbs. My pencil and my eraser are missing. Joe and Bob have fun at Bren.  When connectors other than “and” (for example, as well as, in addition to, together with, except) are used, the verb remains singular My pencil, as well as my eraser, is missing.  If the subject follows the verb, the verb must still agree with the subject. There are five basic positions in classical ballet.  Some subjects look singular but are actually plural. The data from this study are surprising. The phenomena are well documented. Bren Writing Center Fall 2006 Workshop 5 COMMON STYLE MISTAKES “When you are out to describe truth, leave elegance to the tailor.” --Albert Einstein Style in science writing is not necessarily what is stylish or decorative. It’s usually concise and precise. WORD CHOICE “While precision means saying what you mean, clarity means avoiding things that you don’t mean.” --Michael Alley “The Craft of Scientific Writing” Because science writing must be concise, you need to make every word count; therefore, avoid sprawling sentence and trim all excess words. Example of a wordy sentence: According to some biologists, coming up with clear proof of the decreasing numbers of frogs has been difficult. Revision: According to some biologists, offering clear proof of the decreasing number of frogs has been difficult. Example: The purpose of this paper is to try to figure out what is lacking in our current understanding of corrosion and corrosion protection in concrete. Revision: The purpose of this paper is to investigate what is lacking in our current understanding of corrosion and corrosion protection in concrete. TONE Tone is linked to word choice. As you read more in scientific journals, you will recognize what tone is appropriate for a scientific, academic journal or public policy paper. Consider who your audience is: 1. Academic readers: What are their discipline-specific needs? 2. Public policymakers: How do you communicate complex information to a general audience? Example of language that is too informal: There has been a lot of interest in how global warming will affect different countries. Revision: Many organizations, from the United Nations to policymakers in individual countries, are creating programs to deal with global warming. Example of language that is too formal: In that the “Big Bang,” currently the most credible theory about how the universe was created, explains only the Bren Writing Center Fall 2006 Workshop 6 creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorize as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key. More straightforward: The “Big Bang” is the most credible theory for the creation of the universe. Nevertheless, the “Big Bang” explains the creation of only helium and hydrogen. What about the other elements? Many scientists believe that they arose from nuclear reactions that occur in the life and death cycles of stars. ACTIVE OR PASSIVE VERBS? Some scientists use passive tense to put the emphasis on the action rather than the actors. Others favor active verbs that enliven texts. Ultimately, the key to choosing between an active and passive verb is to ask which form is more natural. Example of stilted passive voice: There are some inorganic materials that can be used by bioengineers in the process of tissue engineering that have been shown to be very promising. Acceptable passive voice: Some inorganic materials used in tissue engineering have shown great promise. Example of lifeless passive: A new process for eliminating nitrogen oxides from diesel exhaust engines is presented. More natural: This paper presents a new process for eliminating nitrogen oxides from the exhaust of diesel exhaust engines. Example of weak verb construction: The human immune system is responsible not only for the identification of foreign molecules, but also for actions leading to their immobilization, neutralization, and destruction. Revised with active verbs: The human immune system not only identified foreign molecules, but also immobilizes, neutralizes, and destroys them. Bren Writing Center Fall 2006 Workshop 7 USE OF “I” OR “WE” Some scientists avoid using “I” or “we,” but this is not a hard and fast rule. If you do use this point of view, establish using “I” or “we” early in the document. Example: First, I present my findings about the viscosity of oil on drums. Revision: First, findings about the viscosity of oil on drums are presented. Hint Avoid addressing the reader as “you,” unless writing instructive materials. Example: You can see the results in Table 1. Revision: Table 1 displays the results. FLOW TRANSITIONS Flow is created by making connections between ideas. In your effort to be concise, don’t eliminate transitions that help your writing flow. Example of choppy prose without transitions: Lasers have found widespread application in medicine. Lasers play an important role in the treatment of eye disease and the prevention of blindness. The eye is ideally suited for laser surgery. Most of the eye tissue is transparent. The frequency and focus of the laser beam can be adjusted according to the absorption of the tissue. The beam “cuts” inside the eye with minimal damage to the surrounding tissue—even the tissue between the laser and the incisions. Lasers are effective in treating some causes of blindness. Other treatments are not. The interaction between laser light and eye tissues is not fully understood. Revised paragraph with transitions: Lasers have found widespread application in medicine. For example, they play an important role in the treatment of eye disease and the prevention of blindness. The eye is ideally suited for laser surgery because most of the eye tissue is transparent. The frequency and focus of the laser beam can be adjusted according to the absorption of the tissue so the beam “cuts” inside the eye with minimal damage to the surrounding tissue—even the tissue between the laser and the incisions. While effective in treating some causes of blindness, lasers are not useful for others. More research is needed to more fully understand the interaction between laser light and eye tissues. LINKING WORDS AND PHRASES Make connections within and between sentences using this helpful list of transitional words and phrases. For addition: in addition, furthermore, moreover For cause and effect: because, as a result, hence, because of, as a result of For clarification: in other words, that is, i.e. For contrast: on the other hand, in contrast, however, unlike, conversely For illustration: for example, for instance For intensification: in fact, on the contrary