Revision Summary - English Composition II | ENGL 1102, Quizzes of Grammar and Composition

Download Revision Summary - English Composition II | ENGL 1102 and more Quizzes Grammar and Composition in PDF only on Docsity! English 1102 Mrs. Jennifer Vala 21 February 2011 Revision Summary The main objective for the revision was to discover more opposing views. I had to find a way to make the paper sound more neutral. I have added multiple problematic situations that can result from the replacement of oil. Those problems are distributed throughout the paper. The opposing views are concerned with factors such as—  Loss of time  Unemployment  Loss of GDP  Loss of capital(vehicles in service)  System loss(Transportation) Even though I have stated that oil replacement will cause various problems, at the second last paragraph, I suggested the replacement with details. And concluded the essay by stating that we the choice of making the decision after describing all bad and good sides of oil. In addition, all the marked spelling and grammar errors have been reviewed and corrections were made.