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Pesadilla en Old West, Monografías, Ensayos de Inglés

Writting de 100 palabras corregido

Tipo: Monografías, Ensayos

2017/2018

Subido el 01/04/2024

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¡Descarga Pesadilla en Old West y más Monografías, Ensayos en PDF de Inglés solo en Docsity! A boy organized a party with his brother, her young sister and the friend of the big brother. Her parents call home and her sister picks up the phone, she passes the phone to her big brother. Her parents say that they are going to arrive home soon, but they go to sleep a couple hours. When her parents arrive to a town to sleep, they see a stranger thing. A few hours later (when her parents say that they are at home), they aren’t and the time passed and they didn’t arrive home, so the brother and the sister go to the town they go to sleep but they go to a West City or something similar, they ask a cowboy what is going on here because the town looks like 1800, and they cowboy says that is true. They go to the hotel and they discovered that her parents slept there last night and the big brother ask if they are in her room now but the sir said ¨No, they left yesterday, so because they are tired they go to sleep there that night. The medium brother looked through the window, and he realized that the people of the town repeated the same all the time. However they stopped for a second and they the lined up (????? What do you mean?), so the sister and the medium brother go down to see what happened and the big brother was in the middle of the line and he goes to a build that name is ¨Funeral Parol¨, (????? What do you mean?), The brother goes running with her brother trying to stop, they finally stop her cutting the paper that her brother put her name and they wake up. THIS IS A MESS I DO NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT HAPPENED. Finally, they go to the building and he goes into a cave, that her parents are in, but into a jail, ??? They liberated them and the they went outside, because there was an earthquake. Finally they go home but when they are having a party her parents green blood coming out.???? VERBS IN PAST!!! AND IF YOU USE PRESENT SIMPLE DO NOT FORGET THE 3RD PERSON SINGULAR!!!! S/ES !!!! You need to explain yourself better since the reader cannot understand what are you writing about. SHORTER SENTENCES.
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